Summary of Class Feedback

Below is an overview of the elements in our opening that we could improve on and add to the whole viewing experience that the class and Ms Foster suggested.

• add demonic/sinister laughter when the flashbacks occur
• pacing on the last shot at the end is too long
• adapt the titles and use real horror genre titles.
• longer establishing shot or add another establishing shot.
• longer black screen after production company to signal the start of the film opening.
• tears are non-existent