After having finished making the film opening, there could have been some alterations made when looking back which were pointed out to us after analysing all the feedback research.
In particular, looking back now we could have made the shots of the flashbacks all different rather than the same shots being repeated just to prevent repetitiveness and to keep the audience more interested with what is going to appear next.
In addition to this, we could have applied a glitch when the blood and flashback shots appear, to create more dramatic visuals and illustrate the state of mind of the central character.
Furthermore we had originally planned on putting a teddy and bracelet into the bag that our female protagonist received but we ended up altering this idea as we realised it was quite dull to watch yet we embedded the blood shots and her pacing as she tries to remove the stains.
Another element which wold have improved the final product, which looking back I wish we had done was including a voice over as it would have given a deeper insight into the main characters thoughts and opinion as well supply the audience with an explanation.
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